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		<title>Book Editing Services</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Aug 2011 19:42:38 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Joe Wallace</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[In the last year, when people approach me asking about my editing services, I find some don&#8217;t have a clear picture of what they want from the service. It&#8217;s tough for someone writing their first book, script, or e-book to grasp the different levels of editing that could be required.
Some just want a read-through of [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-280" style="margin: 10px;" title="Book Editing Services Joe Wallace" src="http://editorwriter.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/Book-Editing-Services-Joe-Wallace-300x199.jpg" alt="Book Editing Services Joe Wallace" width="217" height="144" />In the last year, when people approach me asking about my editing services, I find some don&#8217;t have a clear picture of what they want from the service. It&#8217;s tough for someone writing their first book, script, or e-book to grasp the different levels of editing that could be required.</p>
<p>Some just want a read-through of the book for style, flow and content. Others want the technical edit. I get a lot of these requests due to my military background (13 years working for Air Force News Agency and broadcasting detachments overseas covering military issues for radio, television and the Internet).</p>
<p>Some want military jargon and technical details fact-checked, others are just trying to make sure they get military service details correct such as uniforms and service-specific acronyms. Then there those who are confident enough in all of the above and just want the usual copy editing for grammar, spelling, punctuation and the like.</p>
<p>For an experienced editor, expectation management is second nature. Showing an author or scriptwriter what you are willing to do on one level for X amount of dollars sometimes isn&#8217;t the answer. Instead? Defining what your work does NOT cover for that fee and time commitment is sometimes the most important thing.</p>
<p>Once I had a potential client who decided he wanted a lot of in-person meetings, with an ever-changing set of tasks and requirements. I tried very hard to direct this person to the most cost-effective use of time and resources based on his stated goals for the project, but he wouldn&#8217;t listen&#8211;or come up with his own ideas on how it should proceed.</p>
<p>I got the strangest feeling he wanted company, rather than an editor. The lack of direction seemed to be a way to prolong things, intentional or not.</p>
<p>In the end, I had to turn down the work. It paid very well, but I couldn&#8217;t obligate myself to his ever-shifting projects and constant meetings. Sometimes even your best attempts at expectation management don&#8217;t work and you have to walk away. But for projects where you work out clearly defined goals, deliverables, and deadlines, the rewards for patience are wonderful.</p>
<p>My advice for the new editor is to define for yourself first what level of editing you are willing to do, how much you want to charge, and how long you think a given project should take. Knowing your own tolerances going into a project can help you to be more flexible and accommodating when needed, and assist when it is time to stand your ground where appropriate.</p>
<p><em>Joe Wallace is a freelance editor and writer. He is available for books, scripts, and video games and has several colleagues he works with on larger projects. If you need one editor or several, feel free to get in touch:<a href="mailto:jwallace@freelance-zone.com"><strong> jwallace (at) freelance-zone (dot) com.</strong></a></em></p>
<p><em>Wallace recently completed a script editing project in English for a Japanese client and is currently editing a book on voice acting for a Chicago-based voiceover professional. He spends his spare time blogging about rare vinyl records at <strong>Turntabling.net</strong> and working on electronic music projects.<strong><br />
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		<title>The Freelance-Zone.com Freelancer Directory</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Mar 2011 16:46:58 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Joe Wallace</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The Freelancer Directory was offered as a database of freelancers that will be distributed to employers, agencies and individuals who hire freelancers. Register here and we&#8217;ll notify you when the next completed list is sent out. This was a free service dedicated to helping freelancers and those who hire them get connected. The directory is [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Freelancer Directory was offered as a database of freelancers that will be distributed to employers, agencies and individuals who hire freelancers. Register here and we&#8217;ll notify you when the next completed list is sent out. This was a free service dedicated to helping freelancers and those who hire them get connected. The directory is now closed and we are no longer accepting new submissions. Thanks to those who have signed up.</p>
<p>This directory was open to freelance editors and writers of all experience levels but we especially welcomed talented freelance newcomers to sign up. We know how difficult networking can be in the early days of a freelance career and want to help newcomers learn what their job options and resources are in a crowded market.</p>
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		<title>Editor Writer Jobs</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jan 2011 01:27:28 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Joe Wallace</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Editor Jobs]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[Are you looking for editor writer jobs? There are plenty out there if you know where to look:




Simply Hired has a page filled with Editor Writer jobs based on keyword search. You can also find a collection of editing and writing jobs at Indeed.com, and there is also Employment Crossing, but they are a for-pay [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Are you looking for editor writer jobs? There are plenty out there if you know where to look:</p>
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<p>Simply Hired has a page filled with Editor Writer jobs</strong></a> based on keyword search. You can also find a collection of <a href="http://www.indeed.com/q-Editor-jobs.html" target="_blank"><strong>editing and writing jobs at Indeed.com</strong></a>, and there is also<a href="http://www.editingcrossing.com/" target="_blank"> Employment Crossing</a>, but they are a for-pay service and we can&#8217;t verify whether or not they have worthwhile entries at the time of this writing.</p>
<p>Believe it or not, <a href="http://federalgovernmentjobs.us/job-search/writer-editor-1082.html" target="_blank"><strong>Federal Government Jobs has a collection of editor/writer jobs</strong></a>, as does <a href="http://www.writingcrossing.com/video/282/Editor-Writer-Jobs/" target="_blank">Writing Crossing</a>.</p>
<p>Stay tuned for more editor/writer job-related resources.</p>
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		<title>Today&#8217;s Writing Tip Is Those Damn Homonyms</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Sep 2010 14:27:16 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>smacdonald</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I live in a small residential community that is part of a large metropolis. My neighborhood will be undergoing extensive construction to build a light rail system. I had questions about this so I wrote to my local town councilman. Because I use a voice dictation program, when I dictated my letter, instead of saying [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I live in a small residential community that is part of a large metropolis. My neighborhood will be undergoing extensive construction to build a light rail system. I had questions about this so I wrote to my local town councilman. Because I use a voice dictation program, when I dictated my letter, instead of saying Councillor Chiarelli, it said Counselor Chiarelli. I noticed this while I was dictating, but I forgot about it by the end of the letter, and sent it with the wrong title.</p>
<p>What are some of the most embarrassing typos that you&#8217;ve made? My voice program will make some real doozies that don&#8217;t even resemble typos because they are related to voice, rather than keyboard errors, so I really have to watch homonyms (e.g., when I said, &#8220;dictation&#8221; above, my Dragon NaturallySpeaking program typed the words &#8220;patient program.&#8221;) I could use a laugh today. Tell me and my readers about your funniest typos. Post them on my blog at http://beyourowneditor.blogspot.com.</p>
<p>Sigrid Macdonald is a book coach, a manuscript evaluator, and the author of three books, including Be Your Own Editor, now available on Amazon.com: http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t (Paperback) and http://tinyurl.com/2blyqng (Kindle).</p>
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		<title>Today&#8217;s Writing Tip Is on Obscure References</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 12 Sep 2010 07:00:24 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>smacdonald</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Last week, I finished reading Bright-Sided by Barbara Ehrenreich. It was a wonderful critique of the down side of too much positive thinking, and how this can be used to blame people for making themselves ill, and even contribute to economic decline, if leaders in power don&#8217;t want to hear any &#8220;bad news.&#8221;   I wrote Ehrenreich a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Last week, I finished reading <em>Bright-Sided</em> by Barbara Ehrenreich. It was a wonderful critique of the down side of too much positive thinking, and how this can be used to blame people for making themselves ill, and even contribute to economic decline, if leaders in power don&#8217;t want to hear any &#8220;bad news.&#8221;   I wrote Ehrenreich a letter and entitled it &#8220;The Bright Side of the Road.&#8221; I wanted to grab her attention by using a song title by Van Morrison. Right after I pressed send &#8212; naturally! &#8212; it occurred to me that maybe she wasn&#8217;t a fan of Van&#8217;s. If so, she could&#8217;ve missed my reference and thought I was misquoting the title of her book.   Now I will be more careful with obscure references. What may seem obvious to me may be a mystery to someone else. The goal of writing is not to be clever, but to be<em> clear</em> in communicating.  </p>
<p>This week I&#8217;m giving away three free e-copies of <em>Be Your Own Editor</em> to the first people who can each list five well-known dystopian books (not movies). If the first poster mentions <em>The Handmaid&#8217;s Tale</em> by Margaret Atwood, the second poster cannot repeat that title. Post your answers on my blog at <a title="http://beyourowneditor.blogspot.com/ CTRL + Click to follow link" href="wlmailhtml:{7E924F52-2CEB-4389-8E29-84466C59C773}mid://00000130/!x-usc:http://beyourowneditor.blogspot.com/">http://beyourowneditor.blogspot.com</a> and gear up for the next quiz where the winner will win a free paperback copy of the book!  </p>
<p>Sigrid Macdonald is an editor, a manuscript evaluator, and the author of three books, including <em>Be Your Own Editor</em>. Find it on Amazon in paperback for $12.92 (<a title="wlmailhtml:{7E924F52-2CEB-4389-8E29-84466C59C773}mid://00000006/!x-usc:http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t CTRL + Click to follow link" href="wlmailhtml:{7E924F52-2CEB-4389-8E29-84466C59C773}mid://00000130/!x-usc:http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t">http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t</a>) or on Kindle for $3.79 (http://tinyurl.com/2blyqng). </p>
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<div>Last week, I finished reading <em>Bright-Sided</em> by Barbara Ehrenreich. It was a wonderful critique of the down side of too much positive thinking, and how this can be used to blame people for making themselves ill, and even contribute to economic decline, if leaders in power don&#8217;t want to hear any &#8220;bad news.&#8221; </div>
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<div>I wrote Ehrenreich a letter and entitled it &#8220;The Bright Side of the Road.&#8221; I wanted to grab her attention by using a song title by Van Morrison. Right after I pressed send &#8212; naturally! &#8212; it occurred to me that maybe she wasn&#8217;t a fan of Van&#8217;s. If so, she could&#8217;ve missed my reference and thought I was misquoting the title of her book.</div>
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<div>Now I will be more careful with obscure references. What may seem obvious to me may be a mystery to someone else. The goal of writing is not to be clever, but to be<em> clear</em> in communicating.</div>
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<div>This week I&#8217;m giving away three free e-copies of <em>Be Your Own Editor</em> to the first people who can each list five well-known dystopian books (not movies). If the first poster mentions <em>The Handmaid&#8217;s Tale</em> by Margaret Atwood, the second poster cannot repeat that title. Post your answers on my blog at <a title="http://beyourowneditor.blogspot.com/ CTRL + Click to follow link" href="wlmailhtml:{7E924F52-2CEB-4389-8E29-84466C59C773}mid://00000130/!x-usc:http://beyourowneditor.blogspot.com/">http://beyourowneditor.blogspot.com</a> and gear up for the next quiz where the winner will win a free paperback copy of the book!</div>
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<div><span style="line-height: 200%; font-size: 12pt;" lang="EN-US">Sigrid Macdonald is an editor, a manuscript evaluator, and the author of three books, including </span><span style="line-height: 200%; font-size: 12pt;" lang="EN-US"><em>Be Your Own Editor</em>. Find it on Amazon in paperback for $12.92 (<a title="wlmailhtml:{7E924F52-2CEB-4389-8E29-84466C59C773}mid://00000006/!x-usc:http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t CTRL + Click to follow link" href="wlmailhtml:{7E924F52-2CEB-4389-8E29-84466C59C773}mid://00000130/!x-usc:http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t"><span>http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t</span></a>) or on Kindle for $3.79 (<a title="http://tinyurl.com/2blyqng CTRL + Click to follow link"><span>http://tinyurl.com/2blyqng</span></a>). </span></div>
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		<title>Today&#8217;s Writing Tip Is on Misplaced Modifiers</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Aug 2010 01:23:44 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>smacdonald</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Recently, I was watching the new TV show by Tony Robbins. In his premiere episode, he said, &#8220;We&#8217;re here to celebrate two people&#8217;s lives who are extremely important to me.&#8221; What Tony really meant to say was that the two people were very important to him. If he had wanted to say that their lives [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Recently, I was watching the new TV show by Tony Robbins. In his premiere episode, he said, &#8220;We&#8217;re here to celebrate two people&#8217;s lives who are extremely important to me.&#8221; What Tony really meant to say was that the two <em>people</em> were very important to him. If he had wanted to say that their lives were important, he would&#8217;ve said, &#8220;We&#8217;re here to celebrate two people <em>whose </em>lives are extremely important to me.&#8221;</p>
<p>How can we fix it to say what TR meant to say? &#8220;We&#8217;re here to celebrate the lives of two people who are extremely important to me.&#8221; That way the phrase &#8220;who are extremely important to me&#8221; modifies the noun &#8220;two people,&#8221; as opposed to it modifying the word &#8220;lives&#8221; in the original sentence.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s great to know that even Tony Robbins makes mistakes!</p>
<p>Sigrid Macdonald is a book coach, an editor, and the author of three books, including the newly released <em>Be Your Own Editor</em>, available on Lulu or on Amazon in paperback and on Kindle.</p>
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		<title>RSVP, Please &#8212; Today&#8217;s Writing Tip Is on Redundancy</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Aug 2010 07:00:42 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>smacdonald</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[How many times do you run across phrases like this?
David just sent me a text from his cell phone.
I have to be there at 10 AM in the morning.
He was all alone by himself.
The rugged kayak lover grew up in a tiny little town.
Stop! There&#8217;s no need to repeat yourself. We know that a text [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How many times do you run across phrases like this?</p>
<p>David just sent me a text from his cell phone.<br />
I have to be there at 10 AM in the morning.<br />
He was all alone by himself.<br />
The rugged kayak lover grew up in a tiny little town.</p>
<p>Stop! There&#8217;s no need to repeat yourself. We know that a text message is not being sent from a toaster, and that 10 AM will always be morning. When you&#8217;re writing, it&#8217;s good to be creative and allow your juices to flow. Get everything down. But when you&#8217;re editing, streamline. Cut everything that&#8217;s unnecessary. It will make for a much cleaner sentence&#8230; And there is no need to add &#8220;please&#8221; to RSVP because SVP stands for s&#8217;il vous plaît, the French term for please.</p>
<p>Sigrid Macdonald is a book coach, an editor, and the author of three books, including the newly released <em>Be Your Own Editor</em>, available on Lulu or on Amazon in paperback, and on Kindle.</p>
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		<title>When to Use Then and Than</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 06:00:10 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>smacdonald</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[People often confuse then and than, although they mean completely different things. Then is most often used as an adverb, and it indicates something that takes place after an initial action, whereas than is a conjunction usually used to make comparisons. Here are some examples:

&#8220;I ordered Chinese food. Then I went looking for a great [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">People often confuse then and than, although they mean completely different things. Then is most often used as an adverb, and it indicates something that takes place after an initial action, whereas than is a conjunction usually used to make comparisons. Here are some examples:</span></div>
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<p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">&#8220;I ordered Chinese food. Then I went looking for a great DVD.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;I ordered Chinese food, which is much better than Thai in my opinion.&#8221;</span></p>
<p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">The hazard of using &#8220;then&#8221; is that it&#8217;s easy to write a run-on sentence, because it often seems as though &#8220;then&#8221; is still part of your initial sentence, but it&#8217;s not. Example &#8212; &#8220;I got in the car, then turned on the radio.&#8221; That&#8217;s not officially correct. If you&#8217;re a stickler for grammar, you can rephrase it by saying, &#8220;I got in the car, <em>and</em> then turned on the radio.&#8221; Or make it into two sentences: &#8220;I got in the car. Then I turned on the radio.&#8221;</span></p>
<p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Hope everyone enjoyed their Chinese take-in, DVDs, and great music over the weekend.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Sigrid Macdonald is a book coach, a manuscript evaluator, and the author of three books, including <em>Be Your Own Editor</em>, now available on Amazon.com: </span><a title="http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t CTRL + Click to follow link" href="http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">http://tinyurl.com/2a3zx6t</span></a><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> (Paperback) and </span><a href="http://tinyurl.com/2blyqng"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">http://tinyurl.com/2blyqng</span></a><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> (Kindle).</span></div>
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		<title>Today&#8217;s Writing Tip: Don&#8217;t Mix Past and Present Tense</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 24 May 2010 08:00:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Lately, I&#8217;ve been listening to a CD called &#8220;Warning&#8221; by Green Day. In fact, it&#8217;s been on instant replay in my car. I often sing along &#8212; only in private, mind you &#8212; and I always sing the wrong word on a certain line. I finally figured out why that is. It&#8217;s because the boys [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lately, I&#8217;ve been listening to a CD called &#8220;Warning&#8221; by Green Day. In fact, it&#8217;s been on instant replay in my car. I often sing along &#8212; only in private, mind you &#8212; and I always sing the wrong word on a certain line. I finally figured out why that is. It&#8217;s because the boys are mixing past and present tense, and I&#8217;m automatically filling in the correct grammatical version.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s the line from &#8220;Macy&#8217;s Day Parade&#8221;: &#8220;When I was a kid, I thought I wanted all the things that I haven&#8217;t got.&#8221; Okay. What&#8217;s wrong with that sentence? The words &#8220;thought&#8221; and &#8220;wanted&#8221; are both in past tense, but the word &#8220;haven&#8217;t,&#8221; a contraction for &#8220;have not,&#8221; is in present tense. There are a couple of ways to fix this. First, we could say, &#8220;When I was a kid I thought, I wanted all the things that I <strong>had not</strong> (or<strong> hadn&#8217;t</strong>) got.&#8221; That keeps everything in past tense. Second, we could have someone from the present reflect back on the past, and rephrase the sentence like this: &#8220;When I was a kid, I thought, I <strong>want</strong> all the things that I <strong>haven&#8217;t</strong> got.&#8221; (Many people use italics for thoughts, instead of quotation marks.)</p>
<p>Who knew how educational Green Day could be?</p>
<p>Sigrid Macdonald, Author of <em>Be Your Own Editor</em>, now available on Amazon : <a href="http://beyourowneditor.com">http://beyourowneditor.com</a></p>
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		<title>Editor Jobs for May 11 2010</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 11 May 2010 14:24:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here&#8217;s a small sampling of the jobs available for editors this week. Got a hot tip? Drop us a comment and share the love!
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt seeks a K-12 editor for their Evanston, Illinois office. Note that this is an on-site position, not a telecommute.
The Motley Fool is searching for an editor with an obsessive [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s a small sampling of the jobs available for editors this week. Got a hot tip? Drop us a comment and share the love!</p>
<p><a href="https://www.hmhpub.apply2jobs.com/ProfExt/index.cfm?fuseaction=mExternal.showJob&amp;RID=1914&amp;sid=122" target="_blank">Houghton Mifflin Harcourt seeks a K-12 editor</a> for their Evanston, Illinois office. Note that this is an on-site position, not a telecommute.</p>
<p><a href="https://tbe.taleo.net/NA6/ats/careers/requisition.jsp?org=TMF&amp;cws=1&amp;rid=217&amp;source=Indeed.com" target="_blank">The Motley Fool is searching for an editor with an obsessive streak</a> to work in their Alexandria VA office. If you&#8217;re a grammar freak with no problems working with a Content Management System, give this one a try. Again, this is an onsite gig.</p>
<p>This N<a href="http://newyork.craigslist.org/wch/wri/1734157899.html" target="_blank">Y Craigslist ad looks promising&#8211;the ad requests a content editor,</a> which is a bit different than a typical editing gig as it requires specialized knowledge of content management systems and other specialized info. Got a knack for both copy editing AND gap analysis? This could be the gig for you.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.marylandjobnetwork.com/jobs.asp?pagemode=15&amp;jid=2008845&amp;utm_source=Indeed&amp;utm_medium=organic&amp;utm_campaign=Indeed" target="_blank">The University of Maryland has a full-time editor gig</a> open which includes work on web-based teaching materials. Chances are you&#8217;ll edit a combination of distance learning and traditional ed coursework.</p>
<p>Good luck!</p>
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